I have much drams but I think that my dreams is posible to do... I love the AUDI... I always want to buy a audi, I think that this cars are wonderful... awesome... I think that the audi is better than a hummer... but I think that other people say that is better the hummer... I love londres and africa... I always want visit this pleace... londres because I don´t know I think that is a beatiful place but in the future I want visit because I want speak english perfectly... and is a dream, and if I work for do this dream, I know that I can... and I want africa because I think that is awesome... I want see the animal... (lion, tigers, and other diferents animals) I can´t imagine this... because I think that is special... I think that this dreams is posible if I work for this.
Hi Gilberto..!! I liked your composition but I want to tell you a mistake in the second line because You wrote ''I always want to buy a audi'' and is ''I've always wanted to buy an Audi''. Well that's all!! Bye
ResponderEliminarHi Gilberto, I want you job, but you mistake when write much the suspensive dot, you must only uses when really is needs.
ResponderEliminarGreat Dreams Gilberto!
ResponderEliminarBut also you made some mistakes like:
I always wanted to visit this place, you have to use the present perfect, like this: I've always wanted to visit this place,and "I think this dreams is possible..." Is better if you put: I think this dreams are possible.." also I think you have to organized better your ideas and take care with the capital letters.